I think I wasted lots of money.Really.The bill is going to look ugly.Oh dear God.
Skipped CCA just so I can attend tuition. In some ways helpful, in some ways not.The ‘not’:I was too tired 2 fully use my brain.
Anyway, had a chat with the girl, leaving its witnesses more confused.Seriously,if you were 2 hate someone, don’t do it behind their back.Hate outright.I mean, it’s a free world.You hate who you hate;you like who you like.
And after the chat, I hope she’ll continue the criticisms/complaints etc.Good writing material.Not that I’m crazy.Don’t jump to conclusions, or assume things unless you’re absolutely sure.Reminds me of 1 fan fiction…*sniggers*
As requested, here’s another impromptu work.So don’t blame me for any mistakes made; just give constructive criticisms(useful notes for the writer).*Feels unmotivated*
[ The girl stared at the board with glazed eyes, oblivious to what was going on in her class. Why should she care? She never gave a thought to her schoolwork. She’s going to fail. So why bother?
She was called awake by the teacher. Did she just fall asleep? Judging by the stares of her classmates’, perhaps she did.
“What’s wrong with you, Alice?”one inquired.
“Yeah, you slept.”another echoed.
“What’s strange about me sleeping?”she replied her classmates.Why should she be exempted from sleeping in class?Why should her classmate rest and not her? Why do they care? Why do they want to know? It’s her life, not theirs.
Dragging herself back home, she stepped into the white tiled bathroom. The lukewarm water pelted and slid down her skin, refreshing, cooling. She couldn’t help soaking herself longer than necessary. She couldn’t help dressing in a sluggish and slow manner.
“What’s wrong with you?”her sister asked, concerned.
“Nothing.”Alice mumbled back. Why do they keep asking? She looked fine, yes?
She plopped down to bed, drained and suffering from a pounding headache, promptly falling asleep.
The girl, Alice, was called awake by the shrill ring of the alarm clock. Her movements were slow and jerky. And she feels oddly hot yet cold. She knocked on her parents’ room, notifying them that she’s leaving for another empty day in school. She could hear the door knob twist open before all went black.
What?
She woke up in an unfamiliar room.Every thing was white.She could hear voices, and couldn’t resist eavesdropping.Alice found out she fainted from stress and exhaustion, and is currently in a hospital.
She blinked once, twice. What will happen now?
Before she could do anything, sleep consume her once more. Sleep, the red and black ghosts bide her, get a decent rest. The blurry figures vanished from her sight as sleep gripped her. ] ©
I was bored.And unwilling to study.And decided 2 answer a request. Impromptu work so…unless I have a plot, I won’t be able to do much about my writing standards. Review please.
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